Its hard to be definite without seeing the whole package together lol but I like it, I mean I only wore my veil until after the first dance so depends how you feel, you have to do exactly what you want, its your big day!
I hate to be the one that says it but it doesn't go together. Your veil should compliment your dress. The lace is a romantic look while your gown is more modern. You'll want to look your absolute best on your wedding day and that includes making sure your style is well defined. Maybe you could borrow something else from your mother to wear that day. How about a ring for your right hand or a bracelet or earrings. Good luck.
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